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Proofreading Tips #2 Semicolon Conjunctive Adverbs

...Wow, that's a mouthful! These suckers are used to attach two independent clauses as one single sentence. Many people have confusion about when to use commas, semicolons, and colons. Semicolon conjunctive adverbs are helpful to emphasize the relationship between two thoughts (as opposed to separate sentences). Here is a list of words commonly used for this:ConsequentlyFurthermoreHoweverThereforeThenThusAdditionallySimilarlySubsequently
Some examples in sentences include:
"She arrived to school late; consequently, the teacher did not accept her homework."
"Man could not overcome the demon army; thus, the age of darkness was born."
"He forgot

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Behind the scenes making of a comic part 2 colorsby ~westwolf270

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this a quick behind the scenes video of my final comic project before i head for navy boot camp. not gonna say much about except it's for heavy metal magazine, they could take over 6 months to get back to me. in which case i might be in the middle of training. if I finnish training and it doesn't look like the story will be in the mag i guess I'll post it up digitally on the web here...
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part 2
as you can see i went straight to color no inks one this one, and also now you can see the artwork flipped the way it was meant to be. you also might notice a few changes.

there was 8 pages and i couldn't show too much. case that would have ruined the story. but if you're interested in watching a video me finishing one peace from start to finish check here... [link]

all that's missing is the letting, graphic effects on the gutters and finishing it all up. there will be a few previews and walkthroughs i plan on posting before i go. heres hoping it makes the mag!

music: nine inch nails (nin) ghost album track 33
used under the Creative Commons Attribution-Noncommercial Share Alike license. More information: [link]

all character and all art belong to Willie Jimenez